Technical Writing05 marks
Edit the sentences in the following exercises to make them as clear and concise as possible, without changing their meaning. 1.)In many instances the lead engineer failed to submit the personnel evaluations in a timely manner. 2.)A decreasing number of students are studying the sciences, while an in
Edit the sentences in the following exercises to make them as clear and concise as possible, without changing their meaning. 1.)In many instances the lead engineer failed to submit the personnel evaluations in a timely manner. 2.)A decreasing number of students are studying the sciences, while an increasing number of students are studying business and economics. [5]
"In many instances the lead engineer failed to submit the personnel evaluations in a timely manner." Edited version: "The lead engineer often failed to submit personnel evaluations on time." Changes made: - Replaced "In many instances" with "often" (more concise) - Removed "the" before "personnel...